by KupoKupo » Sat Jun 30, 2012 11:03 pm
you wings are kind of where the "tidying up" needs to be - if you look at them, they have very strong horizontal lines going across them, and seem almost pushed in/flat on some places. as for the body itself, it seems a little stiff in some areas, as well as where you have the wings angled, probably because the body is just sort of straight on. this sort of angle works for things like bugs, but for more large scale things like dragons - it sometimes helps to have a bit more of a natural "drag" in the air from flying, or imagining the flight process in small steps and building it on an off pose.