My first organic build ~ Dragon

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My first organic build ~ Dragon

Postby JaggerNotchas » Sat Jun 30, 2012 9:40 pm

How does it look? I struggled on the head the most.

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Re: My first organic build ~ Dragon

Postby peridox » Sat Jun 30, 2012 10:21 pm

Although, of course, it could be tidied up, it looks really cute!
If I were you though, I'd try and get the colours of the wings to match up with those of the body more.
Well done though. :)
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Re: My first organic build ~ Dragon

Postby JaggerNotchas » Sat Jun 30, 2012 10:41 pm

Haha thanks, im a little confused about what you mean by tided up? o.o
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Re: My first organic build ~ Dragon

Postby KupoKupo » Sat Jun 30, 2012 11:03 pm

you wings are kind of where the "tidying up" needs to be - if you look at them, they have very strong horizontal lines going across them, and seem almost pushed in/flat on some places. as for the body itself, it seems a little stiff in some areas, as well as where you have the wings angled, probably because the body is just sort of straight on. this sort of angle works for things like bugs, but for more large scale things like dragons - it sometimes helps to have a bit more of a natural "drag" in the air from flying, or imagining the flight process in small steps and building it on an off pose.
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Re: My first organic build ~ Dragon

Postby JaggerNotchas » Sat Jun 30, 2012 11:17 pm

Alrighty thanks kupo :D
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